Sunday, August 30, 2009


Love @ first fight...

when u told me you hate me,

and pushed me and shouted,

that no one would  date me,

then threw me on the ground 

and kissed me with passion

the ceiling was spinning,

the rugs left their rashes....

put it  all in your hands

as I prayed for my life,

and I hated u that  night

it was love @ first sight












*no, i have never been hit by a man before....

this is just a poem....*

5 comments:

p[L]e[0]a[V]c[E] . said...

i like this .

Lexi said...

Deep

Shandra E...*the misses said...

lol....I love the Disclaimer!!! Some people don't get that when you TRULY love to write....you just write! And that's not to say "it's just writing", because when you truly love it, it's always More!

Sometimes we escape ourselves, our own issues, our own beating hearts....just to reach another!

ashelott said...

i like it
I wrote something similar

http://www.dinnerreviews.com said...

This poem is so hot I got rug burns just reading it! WOW!